Teacher Feedback

nshuttle31 October 2013 04:21

At the moment, your blog is hitting a low LEVEL 3. You have included lots of research and planning and you are interacting with this, giving feedback on where you have made improvements. In order to get to a Level 4, you will need to ensure you develop your production diary, being clear about what you have 'learnt' from these tasks. Also, continue to explore a wider variety of avenues for your research, looking at weather, settings etc. Continue to develop planning into shots, drafting of film etc.

 NSE Level 4 16–20 marks
 �� Planning and research evidence will be complete and detailed.
 �� There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
�� There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding.
�� There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props.
�� Time management is excellent.
�� There is excellent skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the presentation.
�� There are excellent communication skills.
�� There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning.

 nshuttle13 November 2013 02:55

 Frankie Practice filming looks really good - strong mise-en-scene and good variety of shots. Some of the lip syncing works well and there is a clear sense of how it would fit together. Now, develop your analysis and evaulation of each stage, so that you show the progress that we know you are making. So, connect the practice filming back to your planning for it, your audience and the genre conventions. Then connect it forwards - what you have learnt that will affect how you plan and film for the real thing. Mr A