WWW- You went deeply into how he is being portrayed across the years, going from headlines also to how the public have reacted to certain things. I also like the fact you have written about his body language in the different album covers, how he's changed his hair and eye contact.
EBI- Write about how he made it to fame, go into early early Justin Bieber, how certain artists he has collaborate with have changed him.
I have improved my work by adding what artist Justin Beiber collaborated with that changed his image. For example I wrote about his collaboration with the artist 'Tyga'.
WWW- The fact you did different frames for the two was a good idea as you managed to practise lip synching as well as filming. Good analysis on the fact that the song is sad and Karina portrayed emotion through her body language and eyes.
EBI- Say about how Sydney could improve/ what went well with Sydneys, what didn't go so well with Karinas.
I think that Karinas went really well and was good practice for our final piece, however I have now written how Sydney can improve.
WWW- I like the way you have mentioned the semantic field/tone created and how you will need to put this in your music video. Picking out specific examples shows you have an understanding of your song.
EBI- Chorus' are a main part of a song, maybe write about what is in the chorus specifically as this is repeated, the repetition of these lyrics is done for a reason.
I have added more high lighted detail to our lyric analysis, and wrote more beneath, focusing on the chorus.
WWW- you have written in depth about each of your top songs, this is good as you are able to then compare them and see which will work better for you.
EBI- Write a written comparison between each of the songs.
WWW- You are really good at lip synching and the editing of putting the song over the video matched up well, good song choice also.
EBI- show more emotions in your face when miming.
I have been practising since, and I have found that my emotions are a lot better when miming. We have discussed within my group that Karina will be the artist in our music video; therefore she will be doing the lip syncing.
Preliminary Task Evaluation (hit me baby one more time) Slideshare:
WWW- this is a very good detailed piece of work, I like the fact you did screen shots comparing the two videos next to eachother.
Laura Mulvey Theory Slideshare:
WWW- Good understanding of what the theory is
EBI- go into more detail about the music videos and if they go against/for the gaze theory. Relate back to the theory.
I have now included in my slide share whether the music video complies or doesn't comply with the theory. I have also put above a detailed introduction into the theory to summarize what I am assessing.
Beyonce 'Changes Over Time':
WWW- I like the fact you even went into detail about her acting career etc.
EBI- You talk more about album covers and music videos that she has done.
I have included more album covers and posted a music video that clearly displays their branding. I spoken about it as well.
Practice Filming Final Video
elliewallace13 November 2013 09:16
WWW- you have identified what shots don't work and the fact that you have learnt from this
EBI- write about your good shots and why they are good
WWW- I love the fact you have pieced the outfits together yourself using an App that shows that you are using a lot of different technologies.
EBI- link it to celebrity influences of people who are already out there
I linked the outfit choices and style icons to inspirations such as Rhianna and Taylor Momsen. Rhianna is one of our main inspirations, not only for her fashion sense and choice of costume, but also for her branding, music and website.
WWW- You have chosen a range of shoes and linked them to your artist and actress, it is good that you have mentioned about what is on trend now.
EBI- Mention the effect that these shoes make, why you have chosen these in comparison to less chunky shoes and what sort of clothes you would put with these shoes.
WWW- good range of artists and screen shots of their websites
EBI- analyse the websites, their strengths and weaknesses- what you have learnt from this.
Completed. (I analysed the websites by merging them together, with things like this I find it becomes rather repetitive when you analyse such a number of similar things).
EBI- Write a written comparison between each of the songs.
Practice Filming Final Video
elliewallace13 November 2013 09:16
WWW- you have identified what shots don't work and the fact that you have learnt from this
EBI- write about your good shots and why they are good
Final Costumes
Further Costume Ideas
Website Inspiration
Digi Pack Ideas
Organisation timetable